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    FAO Carla & Anyone Interested

    Hi Grammar Queen, I mean Carla ;)

    I made a post on my blog, since I am a perfectionist I need to make sure everything is correct and as it should be. I have multi read this, checked spelling and grammar but I can't do that to the same level as you can. If you have the time, please check this over for me. It is quite long, so don't worry if you cannot.

    http://d1988.blogspot.com/

    Post titled "Social Acceptance".

    Everyone else, read and comment on the blog here possible. It can be discussed here, but on the blog would be nice as well since nobody gives a shit about it.

    I don't usually voive my opinion/thoughts in this way, but I am trying to help myself in new ways and this is some sort of attempt.

    I hope it is of interest to some of you. Thanks for reading.
    I'm a person just like you
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    It's better than getting head
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    I'll even hump it till i bleed
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    dude what a shameless and sneaky way to promote your blog! you could be more subtle about it really lol

    j/k ;)

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    Quote Originally Posted by xCrucialDudex View Post
    dude what a shameless and sneaky way to promote your blog! you could be more subtle about it really lol

    j/k ;)
    Damn, you caught me!

    Nah, people here know about my blog, I hope it isn't seen like that. If it is, Dusty can remove the topic, it's cool.
    I'm a person just like you
    but I like to fuck some shoes
    On the sofa or in my bed
    It's better than getting head
    Tie the laces on my schlong
    'cos of a nike air max it's standing strong
    I'll even hump it till i bleed
    normal sex life i don't need

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    Quote Originally Posted by D1988 View Post
    Damn, you caught me!

    Nah, people here know about my blog, I hope it isn't seen like that. If it is, Dusty can remove the topic, it's cool.
    But I guess not everyone knows you have two of them plus MySpace AND Facebook lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by D1988 View Post
    Damn, you caught me!

    Nah, people here know about my blog, I hope it isn't seen like that. If it is, Dusty can remove the topic, it's cool.
    you're from the message board, dude. you can promote whatever you want!
    I draw and this is my siteRodri-GO!
    Tell your friends!
    Get me a job!

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    Quote Originally Posted by xCrucialDudex View Post
    But I guess not everyone knows you have two of them plus MySpace AND Facebook lol
    haha yeah, I'm not the coolest of people.

    Quote Originally Posted by rodrigo
    you're from the message board, dude. you can promote whatever you want!
    Stand back! Stand back! It's OK, I'm from da message board!
    I'm a person just like you
    but I like to fuck some shoes
    On the sofa or in my bed
    It's better than getting head
    Tie the laces on my schlong
    'cos of a nike air max it's standing strong
    I'll even hump it till i bleed
    normal sex life i don't need

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    Quote Originally Posted by D1988 View Post
    haha yeah, I'm not the coolest of people.
    What do you mean by that? If you mean to say that you're somehow "weird" just because you have two blogs, MySpace and Facebook I will strongly disagree with you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by xCrucialDudex View Post
    What do you mean by that? If you mean to say that you're somehow "weird" just because you have two blogs, MySpace and Facebook I will strongly disagree with you.
    Read the blog and you will understand how it ties in :)
    I'm a person just like you
    but I like to fuck some shoes
    On the sofa or in my bed
    It's better than getting head
    Tie the laces on my schlong
    'cos of a nike air max it's standing strong
    I'll even hump it till i bleed
    normal sex life i don't need

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    Quote Originally Posted by D1988 View Post
    Read the blog and you will understand how it ties in :)
    There you go again! lol

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    Hey man,

    Thanks for the props. I would say the piece is very good and obviously took some thought. I could relate to it personally, which is why it is interesting.

    The only thing that popped out to me as needing some rewriting is this:
    "Maybe it's time for some of the ignorance to be ignored for a while and for some people to open up their own minds and look at things from a different perspective?"

    It's passive and awkward. "It's time for some of the ignorance to be ignored, and for people to open up their minds to see a different perspective" would work better in my humble opinion. :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by CarlaRant View Post
    Hey man,

    Thanks for the props. I would say the piece is very good and obviously took some thought. I could relate to it personally, which is why it is interesting.

    The only thing that popped out to me as needing some rewriting is this:
    "Maybe it's time for some of the ignorance to be ignored for a while and for some people to open up their own minds and look at things from a different perspective?"

    It's passive and awkward. "It's time for some of the ignorance to be ignored, and for people to open up their minds to see a different perspective" would work better in my humble opinion. :)
    Thank you very much Carla.

    I have edited my post as I agree with what you said, words better that way.

    So do I get an F or an A?? :P
    I'm a person just like you
    but I like to fuck some shoes
    On the sofa or in my bed
    It's better than getting head
    Tie the laces on my schlong
    'cos of a nike air max it's standing strong
    I'll even hump it till i bleed
    normal sex life i don't need

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    Quote Originally Posted by CarlaRant View Post
    Hey man,

    Thanks for the props. I would say the piece is very good and obviously took some thought. I could relate to it personally, which is why it is interesting.

    The only thing that popped out to me as needing some rewriting is this:
    "Maybe it's time for some of the ignorance to be ignored for a while and for some people to open up their own minds and look at things from a different perspective?"

    It's passive and awkward. "It's time for some of the ignorance to be ignored, and for people to open up their minds to see a different perspective" would work better in my humble opinion. :)
    I just spent a few minutes pondering the idea of ignoring ignorance!
    Others walk the bow, I walk the string

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    Quote Originally Posted by D1988 View Post
    Thank you very much Carla.

    I have edited my post as I agree with what you said, words better that way.

    So do I get an F or an A?? :P
    95% ;) Good word choice, clarity, conventions, ideas, flow...

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    Quote Originally Posted by CarlaRant View Post
    95% ;) Good word choice, clarity, conventions, ideas, flow...
    Sweet! Thanks Carla.

    Quote Originally Posted by straightXed
    I just spent a few minutes pondering the idea of ignoring ignorance!
    Well, if you think it's silly or doesn't make sense, help me word it better. I am not very good at this type of thing and would appreciate the help.
    I'm a person just like you
    but I like to fuck some shoes
    On the sofa or in my bed
    It's better than getting head
    Tie the laces on my schlong
    'cos of a nike air max it's standing strong
    I'll even hump it till i bleed
    normal sex life i don't need

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    Quote Originally Posted by D1988 View Post
    Well, if you think it's silly or doesn't make sense, help me word it better. I am not very good at this type of thing and would appreciate the help.
    If i thought that i would have said that! I have no idea why you think you aren't very good at this type of thing?
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